11. short film progress

Class critique feedback

• the city could echo gross neural structures in its architecture -
• the information flows could react to stimulus that the audience is able to hear in the sound design. This stimulus could be universal, which would further help to contextualize the visualization. I really like this idea. It seems Brechtian, and reminds me of the feedback of Jess in crit last week: Something I seem to like to do in my work is expose the artifice of the object - make the illusion consciously imperfect.
• the buildings/city architecture could react to the information flows. I like this idea quite a lot as well - it's accurate to the metaphor and adds visual interest.